The Great Wall
Abraham Yeung, Group 1: Fiction, Harrow International School Hong Kong
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The Great Wall of China was built to get away from attacks. Just like if you are a
captain on board on a pirate ship, you get a chance to look out from the lookout, the Great
all of China has temples to look out instead of lookouts! Well, probably I want to tell my
long story (imaginary) now!
Once upon a time, China was split into 10 countries, there also had 2 major emperors in charge of
half of the countries, and one major countries name was Zing and the second one was Ell Emperor.
Actually Ell Emperor had a dragon to kill Zing Emperor to rule China.
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One day, the emperor asked the dragon to help him to kill Zing Emperor.
The reason why he asked the dragon on this mission is because the Emperor thought that he was
smart, talented and strong and he indeed is because he could always think of a way to defeat another
someone or something. So, he called the dragon to come and said” Your mission for today is to kill
Zing and rule china. Isn’t a great deal? ” The dragon did a thumbs-up to the Emperor and flew to Zing
country to defeat Zing emperor. First, he put a millions of white ants on top of the palace to make sure
that the weakness of the palace fall and then put 10 tons of rocks to make the palace fall and break but
since he want to get the rocks, the guards toke them all away! That is why the rocks are all gone
instead of some bushes and dirt! Then he remembered the potion his father gave him that potion that
will make him have more energy. So, he decided to drink 1/3 of the potion the potion’s name is called
“
Good Energy” The reason why the name have an “Energy” on it is because it gives you more energy.
He can put fire on a whole apartment down! The dragon decided to blow the whole palace down
instead of an apartment. Because it was already mid night, everyone was already asleep. That’s why
nobody disturbed him. So, he blew the whole temple down. Every person in the temple died because
of the fire. Then, the dragon flew back to Ell and told his good news to the Emperor and the Emperor
gave him 100,000,000 gold coins & 21 silver coins & 10 bronze coins. The dragon said” I want you to
be with me forever.”
So, the Emperor got his grandfather’s potion and turned the dragon into a long wall that we now
call it the Great Wall of China.
I wonder if my story is good? Well I think my story isn’t bad at all. That would depend on to you!
And if you want to know the true story, you can take another book out if you want, I don’t care. Only
if it is about the Great Wall of China.
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